Review: The Unfinished Corner

The Unfinished Corner

by Dani Colman, illustrated by Rachel Petrovicz


Category: Middle Grade
Reviewer: Stacy Nockowitz

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Five days before her bat mitzvah, Miriam boards a bus with her friends Avi and David -- and her frenemy Judith -- bound for Washington, D.C. But the rabbi driving the bus has other plans for the kids. Instead of taking them on their “tikkun olam” outreach trip, Rabbi Yehudi (the cleverly disguised angel Ma’alchiel of the Ishim) brings the kids to a mysterious desert-like realm and charges them with the task of flushing out all the world’s evil beings and creatures. No problem, right? Thus begins a journey for the four children to find the unfinished corner of the universe, a small area that Hashem left unfinished when the world was created. The only way that Miriam and her friends can carry out the angel’s directive is to “finish” the unfinished corner. This is the unique premise of Dani Colman’s graphic novel The Unfinished Corner. Miriam’s story is the surface layer of the book, but beneath, Colman weaves in a variety of Jewish myths and folklore. The strength of the book lies in the robust  characterization of the four kids and their friendships. Each has his or her own strength that they bring to the group, and reading about them overcoming trauma from their pasts more than makes up for the meager way that the various folk tales are threaded together. The illustrations are excellent, lushly colored and expressive.

The Unfinished Corner
is a well-researched graphic novel, full of little-told Jewish tales. The stories that Colman includes are fascinating, as the kids meet up with Moses’s sister Miriam, the Lion of Judah, gangs of Nephilim, the Golem of Prague, and even Lilith, before finally travelling to the unfinished corner of the universe. I’m not sure more traditional Jews will like the way Miriam and her friends remake the unfinished corner into a kind of a supernatural all-inclusive resort, but the book is spot on in the way it connects with its intended audience. The Unfinished Corner will make a fun addition to synagogue libraries looking for graphic novels.

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Reviewer Stacy Nockowitz is a middle school librarian and former language arts teacher. Stacy received her Bachelor’s Degree from Brandeis University and holds Master's Degrees from Columbia University Teachers College and Kent State University. She is also an MFA candidate in Writing for Children and Young Adults at Vermont College of Fine Arts. Stacy received a PJ Library Writer’s Incentive Award in 2020 for her debut novel THE PRINCE OF STEEL PIER, coming in September 2022 from Kar-Ben Publishing. Find her on Twitter @snockowitz or at